Rough Cut Response Double Page Spread

I had received a lot of feedback from different members of my class both good/positive and bad/constructive criticism here are some suggestions on how i can improve:

Here are some of the responses:
Improvements:

• Picture is a bit dull/take a pic that tells a story
• More Dynamic 
• Too much pink
• More background 
• Needs more images of the artists 
• Article could be longer 
• Possibly a little longer for the article
• Finished column
• Bigger page numbers
• Lots of white space