Wednesday, 25 March 2015

Rough Cut Response Contents Page

I had received a lot of feedback from different members of my class both good/positive and bad/constructive criticism here are some suggestions on how i can improve:

Here are some of the responses:
Improvements:

  • There is to much pink
  • More/Variety of image and models
  • Pink is a little too bright and it is a struggle to read the boxes 
  • Could add another image to have a variety of models 
  • Too plain of a background 
  • Too much pink!!
  • Image is not clear and blurry 
  • Better use of fonts
  • Need a photo of someone else to help with variety
  • To much blocky pink
  • Image is not sharp
  • Have a look at using Times New Roman font

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