Double Page Spread update on story

Whilst i was checking my double page spread i was reading through the article that i had written and i came to the conclusion that it will need improving. To start with i felt that the story was too short and because it has been based on an interview i do not think there were enough questions asked and not enough detailed responses. Furthermore i feel i haven't given Ryan enough of a back story and because it is all about him he needs more information. Finally after doing some research into other fellow magazines i felt like trying to in cooperate some other people/artists to try and keep readers interested instead of becoming bored and unwilling to read more. I will be meeting all of my aims by going out doing further research on what questions to ask and what most readers will enjoy reading because even though i did some research earlier on in the year i feel it was not as useful as it should of bin.